EVADNE MACEDO ON WRITING

FICTION – FOR A CHANGE

CBC Literary Awards 2009 shortlist announced; Finalists to be announced on March 18, 2010

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The 80 finalists on the CBC Literary Awards shortlist were announced on Tuesday February 16, 2010. The calibre of writing in this anonymous competition is very, very high – it showcases the best work of Canada’s most talented writers. See, for example, the winning entries from last year: Columbus Burning by Sarah der Leeuw; Circus by Claire Battershill and Outskirts by Sue Goyette . I submitted three pieces, but did not expect much – I know that I still have much to learn and will happily look forward to studying/enjoying this year’s winning entries! The winners of the 2009 contest will be announced on March 18, 2010 on CBC. I can’t help but notice that Meira Cook has three shortlisted entries in the poetry category … that is quite an achievement!

It feels like spring, and I feel like writing fiction. I am writing bits and pieces of Viral Hatred, but wondering if I should change the title – it’s not quite as heavy as it sounds. I will keep this as a working title until I come up with something better …

I am also getting ready to dive into the final (crossing my fingers) revisions to The 29th Day-- Terry Fallis finished reading it in record time and I am looking forward to hearing his thoughts on  how I might polish my manuscript for an agent’s eyes. I know that I am very fortunate that Terry made space in his busy life to read it (Terry’s brilliant first novel, The Best Laid Plans is one of the six books to be defended in the Canada Also Reads contest and his highly-anticipated second novel, The High Road, is working its way through the production process at McLelland & Stewart). (Thanks again Terry – you are the best!). I am also very excited to have one of my old friends from law school reviewing The 29th Day– she was with me when I procrastinated by writing short stories instead of studying for exams worth 100% of the mark for the year (my excuse was that we would apply the cases we had learned to my fictitious scenarios!).

There was another positive development in my journey to publishing The 29th Day. Kim Moritsugu and Sam Hiyate of The Rights Factory evaluated the first page of  Chapter 1 of The 29th Day at the Humber Writers’ Circle on Saturday February 20, 2010. I really enjoy these events as a chance to meet other writers, listen to an accomplished author speak on the topic “How I write” (Kristen den Hartog spoke this week) and have objective feedback from experts in the field (Kim Moritsugu or Antanas Sileika and various agents and editors). The assessments are conducted anonymously, with the writers being told whether the industry expert would want to keep reading at the end of the page. The reviewers also spend a few minutes suggesting ways in which each piece of the writing could be improved. I find these assessments help to keep the ego in check – it is very easy to think you have written the world’s best manuscript until someone (kindly) points out all the errors! These sessions are very instructive, even if a participant has not submitted a page for assessment.

My last submission was not well-received at all, so I was apprehensive. I was quite pleased with the comments on the page I submitted this time– the reviewers engaged with the narrator’s humour, awkwardness and pedantic nature. In short, they found her sympathetic and wanted to read on. The main concerns raised related to whether particular word choices were consistent with the narrator’s voice, and whether I would be able to sustain certain stylistic elements (likened to Nick Hornby) throughout the course of the novel. These are of course the two big questions that I will be asking myself as I edit my novel in the upcoming weeks. I feel secure that I have written an original story with a compelling voice that will be well-received, if I can eliminate the inconsistencies that I know still exist.

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